Ohio Impromptu

Its ok guys, you don't really HAVE to reply or anything...

...or you can NOT reply.

"She was a statue, aesthetic and nothing more, waiting to granted a pedestal." waiting to be granted a pedestal? Oh yeah, my bad. Thanks for pointing that out. I hate ...

Revised and completed. Man I'm lazy. Airport Dreams Never Left The Ground The world, as seen by the sleep-deprived languorous on the floor of an airport, is the simplest thing ...

Fabulous.... grabulous... zip-zoop-ZABULOUS! Seriously, that was a great read. Well done.

I'll keep that in mind for the future, it makes a lot of sense, but the truth is I can't be bothered going back and changing the whole thing for ...

What happened to Nicola? She moved away.

Yeah, as a haiku it wasn't very good. However, if you extended it and made into something different i think it shows a lot of promise. Maybe give that a ...

The feeling behind that was overwhelming. The writing did it justice too, which is always a good thing to see. How was it formatted on your computer?

It was nice. Simple and innocent but with something deeper than what the words show. I like the past stanza the best. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the feedback guys. :) Rincewind: The other pieces I'm entering are longer, and more interesting too, i guess. I forgot to mention that its not a competition for ...

Sorry about that little thing. I should have made it more clear. Consider it changed. Anything else anyone wanna say?

I'm not exactly sure what you mean, but thanks anyway.

I guess it was a combination of being forced and writing itself. I don't know. But with this i tried to free myself from all emotion (something i don't normally ...

I love that taste.